Could you correct my today's diary? Today's my day off. The weather is good. But weather forecast said it's getting cloudy today. I have a 1 month old baby. My wife took him to the hospital today and the doctor said your baby can go out from now because h (2024)

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Could you correct my today's diary? Today's my day off. The weather is good. But weather forecast said it's getting cloudy today. I have a 1 month old baby. My wife took him to the hospital today and the doctor said your baby can go out from now because he's very healthy. And then, I went to the park with my family. My baby went there for the first time in his life. I played there with my elder son with slide and swing. My wife was walking around while carrying our baby with stroller. We had a great time. (2)

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Today's my Day off. For now the weather is nice, but weather forecast said it might get cloudy.
I have a 1-month-old-baby. Today my wife took him to the hospital. The doctor said that he was very healthy and he could go home .
Later that day, me and my family spent some time in the park. Our baby had never been to a park before, so it was nice to see him experience it for the first time.
Me and my oldest son played on the swing and slide, while my wife walked around carrying our baby in the stroller.
We had a great time as a family.

Could you correct my today's diary? Today's my day off. The weather is good. But weather forecast said it's getting cloudy today. I have a 1 month old baby. My wife took him to the hospital today and the doctor said your baby can go out from now because he's very healthy. And then, I went to the park with my family. My baby went there for the first time in his life. I played there with my elder son with slide and swing. My wife was walking around while carrying our baby with stroller. We had a great time. (4)

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Today's my Day off. For now the weather is nice, but weather forecast said it might get cloudy.
I have a 1-month-old-baby. Today my wife took him to the hospital. The doctor said that he was very healthy and he could go home .
Later that day, me and my family spent some time in the park. Our baby had never been to a park before, so it was nice to see him experience it for the first time.
Me and my oldest son played on the swing and slide, while my wife walked around carrying our baby in the stroller.
We had a great time as a family.

Could you correct my today's diary? Today's my day off. The weather is good. But weather forecast said it's getting cloudy today. I have a 1 month old baby. My wife took him to the hospital today and the doctor said your baby can go out from now because he's very healthy. And then, I went to the park with my family. My baby went there for the first time in his life. I played there with my elder son with slide and swing. My wife was walking around while carrying our baby with stroller. We had a great time. (11)

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my today's diary -> my diary entry for today

your baby -> our baby

with slide and swing -> on the slide and swing

carrying our baby with stroller -> pushing our baby in the stroller

what a nice story!

Could you correct my today's diary? Today's my day off. The weather is good. But weather forecast said it's getting cloudy today. I have a 1 month old baby. My wife took him to the hospital today and the doctor said your baby can go out from now because he's very healthy. And then, I went to the park with my family. My baby went there for the first time in his life. I played there with my elder son with slide and swing. My wife was walking around while carrying our baby with stroller. We had a great time. (18)

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Could you correct my today's diary? Today's my day off. The weather is good. But weather forecast said it's getting cloudy today. I have a 1 month old baby. My wife took him to the hospital today and the doctor said your baby can go out from now because he's very healthy. And then, I went to the park with my family. My baby went there for the first time in his life. I played there with my elder son with slide and swing. My wife was walking around while carrying our baby with stroller. We had a great time. (27)

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Could you correct my today's diary? Today's my day off. The weather is good. But weather forecast said it's getting cloudy today. I have a 1 month old baby. My wife took him to the hospital today and the doctor said your baby can go out from now because he's very healthy. And then, I went to the park with my family. My baby went there for the first time in his life. I played there with my elder son with slide and swing. My wife was walking around while carrying our baby with stroller. We had a great time. (29)

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